Queen Camilla Discusses Lifelong Love of Reading in BBC Documentary

In a new BBC documentary, Queen Camilla spoke about how books shaped her education after she left school at 16. She remembered reading Lady Chatterley's Lover by torchlight as a teenager and said she and King Charles read together before dinner, though his laughter can interrupt her. Camilla credited her father with sparking her love of reading and mentioned childhood favorites such as Treasure Island and Peter Pan.
Camilla left formal schooling at sixteen, a time when, she says, women in her circle generally did not attend university. She has described books as supplying much of her education. Her father, Major Bruce Shand, read aloud to her early; he had turned to reading while a prisoner of war. Among her childhood favorites were Treasure Island, Peter Pan, The Scarlet Pimpernel, and A Tale of Two Cities.
As a teenager she encountered romances and D.H. Lawrence's Lady Chatterley's Lover, a novel about an aristocratic woman's affair with a gamekeeper that faced an obscenity trial when published in full in 1960. In the documentary, she also notes that she and King Charles read before dinner; his enjoyment of biographies and P.G. Wodehouse can interrupt her.
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